Essay
Today we wrote our essay. This essay wasn’t as difficult as the last one we did since he helped us through it and helped us get a better understanding of it. I believe i did bet on this one than i did on the last one.
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Prepare
Today we prepared for our essay we are writing tomorrow. We worked on tone, diction, and selection of details. We worked on claims and our commentary coming from one specific letter. I still really don’t get it but we’ll see how well tomorrow goes.
Celie explores herself
We wrote letters from a specific characters point of view. We also used STEAL to help get a better understanding about how they would talk and write and what they would say. We then read some more letters from the color purple and Shug convinces Celie to explore herself and see how she looks for she’s never seen herself before since she was raped.
Letter to God
Dear God, Ise done somethings that ise know youse probably heard about. I told her to tell nobody but you about it or it’d kill ha mammy. Well hers mammy dead so she must told somebody other than you. Id ast for forgiveness but i know it’s to late to for it. I dun took Celie children away i don’t want nobody to know i dun had children by that ugly child of mine. God i ast if you would keep Nettie in school and not let her marry Mr., that my pretty child and i want her all to myself because doesn’t nobody want no teacher. Please i ast of you.
SHUGGG
We went over some claims from our essays. We then read some more of the color purple. We finally know what’s Mr name it’s ALBERT. Albert loves Shug Avery till the point he is now vulnerable to Celie. We then wrote claims from what we read in class.
Essay
We attempted to do more questions for the color purple but weren’t successful at finishing it so we have to finish it for homework. We then went over some thesis statement and claims from our essay and let’s say i wasn’t pleased with my grade but at least i know i tried my best. Then we started reading the color purple at the end of class.